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the plasticized quantum theory by ~freakoutsyndrome:iconfreakoutsyndrome:





alabaster immortality
une voleur honteux
slip of the tongue
in each saturated pore
spectrum rehearses its symphony

crooked whispers of a flute
a glimpse of blue infinitude
quiets the confines of los alamos
¿quién es él? eso piensa
en kaleidoscopes

paralysis in the peristalsis
jewel in the vitreous humor
phosphorescent anti-matter
until it watercolors
the poison of psyche

papillae the plagues
oxidizing ash and ember
a quivering effigy
splinters the moon
instinctually

the mirrored hand exhales
swept the epileptic ceiling
dissolving tendrils of mahogany
detached from the retina
unblemished

tranquil, the deception
immutable twilight
the film frame fades
captured in the mercury
©2006-2009 ~freakoutsyndrome
:iconfreakoutsyndrome:

Author's Comments

from particles to reaction

09.April.06

"If the radiance of a thousand suns were to burst at once into the sky that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One ... I am become Death, the Shatterer of Worlds"

Daily Deviation

Given 2006-04-09

the plasticized quantum theory by ~freakoutsyndrome weaves an interesting study of a portrait, subtly extending the language barriers and capturing the right words to paint the image. Worth reading and coming back to. (Featured by `coshdaddy)

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:icondarkflameangel:
wow...this is very striking..Beautiful work.

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I prefer to interact with people in a kind and gentle manner....But I am also not opposed to establishing my dominance in a reign of terror.
:iconi-04:
The hills have eyes..

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:iconfreakoutsyndrome:
thank you
it took some time
to get right

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Hustlers of the world : There is one Mark you cannot beat...the Mark inside.
:iconfreakoutsyndrome:
what hills are left.

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Hustlers of the world : There is one Mark you cannot beat...the Mark inside.
:iconjay-bug:
Usually I dislike unstructured poetry, because it seems lazy or like it lacks work ethic. This, however, proves me wrong.

This poem brings only three words to mind: Spero dum spiro. For the moment after I read this, I stopped breathing, and only logically...well, you figure it out.

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Move like a child
Think like a guru
Love like a god
:iconhornylildeviant:
"une voleur honteux"

un voleur honteux. voleur is a masculine noun, therefore you have the use the masculine for "a", which is "un" ("une" is the feminine)

-~HornyLilDeviant, but you can call me your french grammar nazi ;)

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My account name kicks your account name's ass
My avatar kicks your avatar's ass
My signature kicks your signature's ass
You don't agree with me?
Don't make me have to kick your ass!
[link] Sound -> Image -> New Sound
:iconfreakoutsyndrome:
i know, thank you
i do love french
but it was intended
for my own effects

thanks though

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Hustlers of the world : There is one Mark you cannot beat...the Mark inside.
:iconpraetoritevong:
It's awesome, very nicely constructed, language fits in well.

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"Absence and death are the same - only in death there is no suffering."
:iconshameshowsguiltiness:
Interesting, but I like.

--MX

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"Takk...everyone" --Sigur Ros
:iconfreakoutsyndrome:
the first version was very structured
i took it apart and reassembled it
i appreciate your appreciation

i was in a rather hopeless state of mind
when writing this one

and i definitely appreciate
that the intent was not lost on you

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Hustlers of the world : There is one Mark you cannot beat...the Mark inside.

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